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Monday, March 1, 2010
Area of Improvement Question
This is where you post for any areas of improvement.
I agree with Austin! There was nothing really to improve on. You did a great job! There was a lot of voice and im sure Sandra herself would be proud of this blog.
Dear Bailey, You did a great job with your blog, but the one thing you might have worked on is making your first influence a little longer and explaining a little better.
Theres not much to improve on a great blog probably the 1rst influenced could be a little longer and tell more but really alltogether a good job!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Austin! There was nothing really to improve on. You did a great job! There was a lot of voice and im sure Sandra herself would be proud of this blog.
ReplyDeleteDear Bailey,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job with your blog, but the one thing you might have worked on is making your first influence a little longer and explaining a little better.
I really enjoyed this very interesting blog but I think that you need to expand on the information just a little more.
ReplyDeleteI think that the only thing that could be changed to make this any better would be to make the First influence a little long. Great job. (:
ReplyDeleteDear Bailey,
ReplyDeleteI think your 1st influence is a little long. But good job with the over achieving!
Good job Bailey! maybe just explain your first influence a little more! Terrific!!!:)
ReplyDeleteYeaa i agree with everybody else but, im kinda disapointed that you didnt write on mines...;)
ReplyDeleteI agree with EVERYONE! You did an awesome job!
ReplyDeleteBailey! Good job, but I think you could have added a little more voice and expression to your writings.
ReplyDeleteYou did great but, I think this blog could have used a little more expression!
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